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Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 12:12 am
by GlytchMeister
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 12:13 am
by shadowinthelight
Complicated romance web is complicated.
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 12:15 am
by AnotherFairportfan
The wonderful world of teenage angst. It's the end if the world, and I just bought the most bitchin' shoes for prom!
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 12:23 am
by Dave
Good in a way to see that Jessie's smile wasn't malicious... it was what Ray Bradbury described as "the kind of smile that, on the face of a baby, means gas." She could be in trouble with the Queen Bee through no fault of her own... now, to see if her damage control efforts make things worse rather than better.
Typo: Now what am I supposed to do...
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 12:24 am
by DilyV
1. Last panel, "now what am I supposed to do?" Now is missing the W...
2. Aaaaaaaaand hilarity (or tragedy) ensues.
EDIT: Ahhh ya nicked me Dave!!!!
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 12:26 am
by GlytchMeister
*happy dance*

(My first first post for a daily topic!)
Ahem.
I wonder how complicated Paul is gonna make this, and how happily ever after-ish the resolution will be.
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 12:29 am
by Sgt. Howard
HANSONTOONS called it- she was worried about repercussions when Atsali realizes that Jessie's Brother is the reason for the cancelled date...
.. and so a Ninja corners Jessie away from water, and as he pulls his blades he says, "MWAH! SUSHI! Toto mo oi schi!"
("AHAH! SUSHI! Very tasty!")
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 12:53 am
by Opus the Poet
I think that this relationship will have to be mapped in n-space, not enough directions to map in 3D...

Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 1:06 am
by jwhouk
This is like Twelfth Night, except that this has paranormal players.
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 1:51 am
by oldmanmickey
This is getting to the soap opera level of interconnection.
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 3:04 am
by AmriloJim
Jessie is still locked into the manipulative mindset of the "queen bee" status quo. She fears retribution that is not consistent with "Sali's character. As voiced above, let's hope the 'damage control' doesn't backfire.
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 3:42 am
by tombone
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 3:49 am
by kingklash
Miss K is as surprised as anyone.
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 4:18 am
by TheCollector
Y'know, I seem to be the only one thinking this way, but I don't think her frantic worry is for what everyone seems to think. Yes, she's worried about herself, but I think it's less fear of being ridiculed, and more fear of losing Atsali as whatever they've become. We may not of seen many scenes of the two together, but obviously they've hung out, and as the first thing that crossed her mind, before the thought of blame, is how much Atsali was looking forward to the date, then I think she considers her a friend now. And that's the main cause of her worry, losing that.
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 4:34 am
by lake_wrangler
Oh, what a tangled web we weave, when first we practice to ...
... write a webcomic?

Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 5:55 am
by zachariah
oldmanmickey wrote:This is getting to the soap opera level of interconnection.
Totally. In fact I think it will get worse.
Plus Paul is using another trope for the story line. Friends do stupid things to protect someone from being emotionally hurt. All Jessi has to do is call Berdi and ask if she has heard about this. Problem and worry gone. Will anyone think to do this NOOOOOO they won't. All Jessi thinks to do is call in someone who is totally in the dark to help.
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 7:14 am
by AnotherFairportfan
One of the major long-established SF clubs (if you don't know/can't guess which, not saying) has (or, at least, had last i heard) a Chart...
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 7:17 am
by AnotherFairportfan
One thing we learn here is that Atsali and Jessie are at least at the "exchanging confidences" relationship level...
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 7:18 am
by AnotherFairportfan
oldmanmickey wrote:This is getting to the soap opera level of interconnection.
Yep. Paul has skipped over the plot flour level and gone straight for the plot cornstarch.
Re: Focus 2015-04-22
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 7:21 am
by Hansontoons
Sgt. Howard wrote:HANSONTOONS called it- she was worried about repercussions when Atsali realizes that Jessie's Brother is the reason for the cancelled date...
.. and so a Ninja corners Jessie away from water, and as he pulls his blades he says, "MWAH! SUSHI! Toto mo oi schi!"
("AHAH! SUSHI! Very tasty!")
My speculation was the fortuitous result of a caffeine-induced delerium.
More sugar!