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Atsali isn't human. She's not even part human. She's part Succubus and part Siren. At no point is it logical to assume her neurological structure is at all similar to that of a human. Nor is it at all safe to assume her psychological makeup functions, reacts, and grows like a human. To say her ment...

Oh, joy- depressed-teen-as-bearer-of-immense-dark/unholy/alien-power. I guess the author hasn't yet stooped to suicide as brinkmanship for who's got the most drama. That's a good thing- except the whole Sword of Damocles effect. ...huh. It appears I am a little bitter of the whole thing with Atsali...

If the author ever- no, wait.. When the author introduces weretortoises , how long do y'all reckon their fangs will be? They wont have Fangs, instead they'll have single piece beaks instead of teeth... You really think so? Everybody except Katherine and amnesiac demigod boyfriend seems to have fang...

If the author ever- no, wait.. When the author introduces weretortoises, how long do y'all reckon their fangs will be?

Oh, joy- depressed-teen-as-bearer-of-immense-dark/unholy/alien-power. I guess the author hasn't yet stooped to suicide as brinkmanship for who's got the most drama. That's a good thing- except the whole Sword of Damocles effect. ...huh. It appears I am a little bitter of the whole thing with Atsali.

Oo! Ooo! What're getting next? Cutting? Suicide? Suicide is probably the author's only hope for topping Atsali's absolutely-impossible-collection-of-psychological-disorders. Since the siren is somehow not catatonic with her Costco-sized brain-drama nonsense, at this point I think he'd need to write ...

I see a lot of interesting ideas in here- a lot of valid points. I don't think I quite subscribe to any of them yet, but some great observation, just the same. I'm still grinding gears on Sali, and the noises coming from the transmission mostly sound like, "Additional pathos! Yay ." Writer...

And don't you jerky jerk-faces post spoilers in the comments! :roll: Before anybody gets hyper-defensive: I'm not talking shit. I'm asking questions and pointing out problems that nag at me. Honest, thoughtful critique is something authors can use to improve their craft. Before anyone tells me to se...

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er.. yes, dear?

I'm unclear on whether that was exasperation, a warning, or a stunned murmur of awe at my creative magnificence..

Frame 2 can haz too many coherent sentences- had to sacrifice one for the greater good. But Tina's crew still can haz badonka-donk. Jessie- Drag her by the ear over to the other freshmen and they will sort it out- friendship demands it SQUEEE friendship is magic! And it's Poseidon's fault! (Shadow s...

Oh, I was guessing that they're daughters of the Erinyes. One of the three whose name we have is Alecto/Alekto. The other two are Megaera, and Tisiphone or Tilphousia. Ye gods- the Furies reproducing. "Aw, look- the three utterly mad, self-propelled neutron bombs had babies! Squeee!", no ...

Wow. I feel like I'm the only millennial here. I suppose this explains why so many of your references and jokes whizz right over my head so often. Not to worry, son- there are deep wells of wisdom here to draw from... most of it will get you in trouble, but it's still fun... Of course, that 'wisdom...

And, this is how most conspiracy theories start. ????? I'll have to respectfully disagree on that. Some, oh yeah, definitely. But it's generally because the official story/narrative sounds screwy and things don't add up, or seem to be outright fabrication(s)., or something painfully obvious is seen...

I've gotta say: I really enjoy the writing regarding Jessie. She started out as a pretty obvious high school queen bitch, albeit an honorable one, turned out to be human(for a given value of 'human'), concerned for others, protective of someone who she could have seen as a rival to undermine, and no...

Seriously? I have to say I've never gotten someone wedged elbow deep in my cleavage.. Trying to figure out how that happened... turning around into it wouldn't work.. so it seems to indicate that she'd have to walk into it, at which I have to wonder WHY? Given that wapsi limbs are used to: A) manip...

Well, well, well. Judging by the latest posting at Paul's eBay page, he's spent a fair amount of time working out how to draw Devyn. Odds on whether we're getting a new cast member? heh. One of the scribbled notes on the 'Devyn Studies' rather tickled me: "very square hairstyle". Would I ...

The number one rule of public rules and signs: A warning is always put there because people kept doing it. "Deer Crossing" signs are put up along the roads where there have been a certain number of unfortunate deer/vehicle interactions. But do the deer ever pay attention to the signs?? No...

Alright, see this thing some of the posters are talking about "inherent sexuality". that isnt a thing. Also supposedly that people dont have a choice either way and some serious rubbish about menstruation that isnt even biologically accurate, read a frikkin book, watch a documentary if yo...

I like this kid. And despise the French. Mostly because I've worked with their military, but that's neither here nor there. I was accused of trying to start an international incident at my last Reforger... but as it was against a French observer, I was able to explain that there was no risk involve...